How I wrote 1st class essays at Cambridge University (how to write the best essay)

Could this also be used in Cambridge Checkpoint?

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Hello, any tips for nov 2023

Thank you very much DR. They tell us to always include citations in our essays but they don’t even tell us how to properly write an essay.

this literally saved me! i got perfect scores in my essay exams ever since i watched this❤️

Love you Shaene❤

Thank you

Dear Dr Shaene, I really appreciate you making this video. I loved that you went straight to the point and made this so informative. I have learned a lot! Thank you!

OK why is this more helpful than the SEVERAL years of university I've had... Thank you!!

Thank you sir so much for this very very very informative and practical video.

can we apply this to law essays?

I love how you provided examples for every part of the essay! Thank youuu

this is beautiful and madness at the same time. you sir, literally saved my life

This 10min video better summerises my entire education than hours and hours of lectures. Thank you

How can you refer to studies? On a similar task, I would try to find out about studies that confirms my key points (evidence), but when I search for it I don’t find any studies confirming them, is there a special way to find those studies? Thanks for the tips in the video:)

Thank you for this very informative video ❤

Shouldn't you also reference where your claims come from? else according to our teacher its not valid evidence.. Hm^^

Irrelevant! We can always count on AI these days. In fact many are already doing so.

thankyou

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Its my last year of University and sitting for my exam today ..........thank you so much

Does this work with non science essays

If my English is not good in writing my dissertation. Is there are any sites to use

I'm here because I have to write an 8000 words academic essay in the legal field for my master's degree. Having been out of school for almost 12 years, my mind is so rusty and needs serious polishing. I am totally clueless and stressed! This will really help me.

Thank you so much!

Great video, easy to follow your instructions plus the diagram helped me understand the process. thank you very much.

Thank you for being such a life saver Shaene

I am writing my first essay assignment and i definitely am going to use this essay writing style. Thanks, Doctor Shaene. Your work is brilliant.

You are going well dude but you too fast 😢

University professors are truly useless. Everything is awesome about this video except the accent. It's so exhausting to listen to him

Bro I have a very important question to ask man. I have been hearing a lot about this collage marriage thing people do in Cambridge where a male and a female student get "married" to adopt "children" from among the Freshers to guide them through fresher's week. Is there a way to avoid this collage marriage thing?

I watched your video once.... DUDE JUST ONCE! the next i scored the highest marks in my school. And it reigned till my sophomore years! Thanks to you I am choosing arts stream and will definitely become a good person like you!

I am in my first year of college and I have never learned how to write. I wrote a college letter probably riddled with errors about how I was horrible abused and obviously I got into community college lol. But yes no I never learned how to write only how to format my paper so my little name is at the top

The struggle with those struggling people is due to the fact that they had been hiding from the professors when it is time for them to attend classes. Or some of them fall asleep after going to the late night hangouts with friends.
I appreciate the effort the creator has put into this video. Wholeheartedly I do, but it is not still up to university standard even if this is somewhere at Oxford/Cambridge. On the spot, we know that he didn’t put any references and citations which is a sign of lacking academic integrity. Secondly, there is no linking sentence between paragraphs. Third, there is no vivid examples provided in support of his statement.
And some people here be like ‘10 minutes has been worth more than 3 years at a university’. Guys, you have wasted your parents hard-earned money😅

Thanks for this. Will try to incorporate these points in my answer writing. It has cleared up many confusions about writing. The structure discussed here has also given me an outlook on how concepts are discussed in books. This is helpful as I'm graduating through distance learning.

Thank you.

Thanks mate, I watch this video every time before I write an essay. And I always pass xxx

Thank you so much for this video! I barely got a pass for my first essay, but hopefully with this video, it will help me improve my second assignment of scientific essay :)

Thanks Doctor Shaene, this was great advice ;)

Can I use this format in writing a case study in nursing care?

You helped me go from 53 to 70 all just because of this video. You're more than amazing!

wow, thank you so much!!!! this is so helpful! I am grateful to find this video, just nice, there is an essay to write that is due on Tuesday

I still come back to this video at the beginning of every semester. Always a helpful refresher!

Farming and Technology should be a major concern and no babies please the world is overpopulated Our saviour is alive and with us.

i won first place because of this video :DD

Tfw, when you wrote great essays as a high school student, but 3 years of engineering degree and “fun” elective class later, you forgot how to write essays. 😅

So we just repeat the formula for every point in the main body? Because my essay has like 15 different points I need to talk about?

Also you didn't cover about referencing. Surely if I wrote something like that without any referencing I'd get done for plagiarism no?

This is a top notch essay at Cambridge? Seems to be repetatively labouring the obvious… yes narrative is important but how much hand-holding does the reader truly need?