I Edited 1000 College Essays... Here's What Actually Works

How does this guy not have more subscribers?? His words are like nectar on paper

Ma men Kevin, just wanna thank you for the videos and shorts, they were really really useful in my applications process. Now just wait to the results!!! 💪 you literally saved me with every essay. Your work is of and amazing quality, keep it up and greetings

Thanks Kevin, Really helpful.

All great, but #7 the winding journey stands out to me most as a superb tip for CAPS. Thanks for what you do for the students!

I love Kevin!
Thanks to him and elevated team I got in UPenn ed this year!

Hey, Kevin. I could really use your help, now that RD is close. Could you give me a quick feedback on my PS?

Please can someone give me more ideas for a common app essay about how the scholarship would help you because I have written two essays on it and I don't want to repeat the same things again,and please how do I tailor essays .

I really admire the effort and authenticity in these videos. Really helpful and useful tips. Thank you so much <3

Is it necessary to add headings to every essay

Well, not everyone wants to be a liberal arts major at a community college. I think college admissions offices have their priorities skewed in the wrong direction if they apply the same yardstick to each candidate's application. Seriously, if someone wants to major in quantum physics or molecular genetics with an end-goal of a career on the cutting edge of human understanding of the fabric of the universe or the very foundations of biological life itself, if I were to be an admissions officer, I sure would not want to be dragged through some emotionally-manipulative sob story fabricated to draw the reader in, or shown political leadership qualities, or the candidate's commitment to social-activism, crusading for the cause-du-jour in their spare time. No, I would want to see evidence of their passion for their chosen majors, their proven ability to endure the academic rigor those majors would demand, resilience under pressure to ensure their success, and moral character to be a good citizen on campus. That is what I would look for in all STEM majors, especially if it's a Tier-1 Research University.

Bruh my life boring asf. What am i supposed to write about?? Just over a month left till the deadline
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Hey i am an Indian student from a remote area. i am not exposed to Sat or ap courses. I applied to harvard via test optional will i get rejected (I have 95% score for all final exams from 9 to 12 grade)

Thank you for the incredible help your videos are! I have a question - if I volunteer occasionally in a community center (for festivals, stage panels, etc), what should I put in hrs/week? I do 6-12 hrs per event every 1-2 months (grades 9-12). Thanks again!

Crazy how useful these videos are. Thank you Kevin.

Hi Kevin. Can I write on how I spend my school break and how I have impacted my community during that time in the additional information section?

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Why we don't talk about how creative and artistic Kevin is? His talking is literally illustrates that he is a writer/poet at heart

Hey kevin...I can't express my gratitude to you... writing essays was impossible for me but I found you and your vdos to rescue me... wish me luck for the decisions to come soon❤

Hi Kevin! I'm trying to apply tip#1 on my opening and closing sentences. My essay is about how I'm thankful for a certain experience with my friends and how it motivated me to spread empowerment to others.
"I'm not usually grateful when someone breaks my phone. It's also unlikely that the culprit will become my best friend for the next four years"
"I'll continue to play my part in breaking mental loops, even if I have to break a phone in the process"
I was unsure if the last line felt a bit forced, any feedback?

hello kevin. i am navigating the choppy waters. thanks kev!