How to Write a Compelling Fight Scene for Your Novel

You are so underrated!

Thank you for the excellent video!

This comment is a request.
Unrelated to your video.
I have been watching your videos and am in awe on how many useful tips you provide on writing on your channel.
Not being a published author, I strive to publish my debut fantasy series as soon as I can.

But this comment is to ask for your recommendations on certain plots for fantasy, magic school trope (for writing, as I'm working on my debut series)

I have build a magic world and it's a coming of age, young adult fantasy series and I would honestly love your opinions and suggestions.

So basically, I feel stuck in my story despite working on it for 3 years and since you have read many stories, your suggestion would be of high value to me.

It's a magic school story, with learning magic to saving it, to possessing more magic than others, there's politics, there's a social evil character trying to win over the world.

I need some plot points. Some suggestions.
Well, take it this way.
You have read many books, seen them in the publishing rounds and you have your favourite themes.
Well I'm interested in adding those themes in my novels.

As many themes as you like, all are appreciated.

If in the future, I do end up using those themes or anything that you wish to see in novels, I will mention your name in the acknowledgements of my book.
- to be author of HEDS Series (hope soon, so you can see your name in the acknowledgements, do contact me if you find your name and want to give even more suggestions or talk to me regarding my novels)

You’re doing a great job

Don’t you mean, faster then a slave master cracking his whip on the back of a run away slave? 😅😅😂😂😂

What about a fight scene in which one character is using a large dildo like it’s a light saber, while his opponent is using two dildos like a pair of nunchucks. How would you describe that fight scene.😂😂😅😅😅🤣🤣😆😆

Madam Powers! Are this channel and your writer coaching website still active? Are we getting a sequel to Keeper of Shadows? I am 2/3 of the way through and absolutely loving it. I need more!

Also, I found you recently and 100% agree that you’re underrated. The tools you have provided have been invaluable.

your videos are highly useful...thanks for helping everyone.. again thanks and love you.. godbless