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harvey weinstein jump scare
ОтветитьBring back Rocket Jump
ОтветитьIt's the crunchy munchy man. In the flesh. I am pleased.
ОтветитьI like this
ОтветитьAnd for musical conedies without crime inside?
ОтветитьI really enjoyed your explanations with copious amounts of real life examples!
ОтветитьIn the 80s NYC was considered a dangerous city, NYC cop face danger different from LA cops. But John McClane is even beyond that. He's saving both his wive and his marriage.
ОтветитьGreat!
I had written a feature length script 4 month ago and I couldn't find a good logline for it
now after I writed the second draft I searched for a good example of longlines
and this really helped me!
This didn't age well...
ОтветитьThis vodeop aged like milk with Harvey Weinstein as your elevator pitch.
ОтветитьThis is genius idea! Thank You sir
Ответитьoh, shit, this was made months before the allegations came out.
ОтветитьOh crap... How can I trust you now? What if there's a sixth question? hahaha
ОтветитьHow things change in 4 short years… When Harvey Weinstein is the high-water mark of the video.
ОтветитьWhat about a movie like The Conjuring? Should the logline follow the Warrens or the family that's are being attacked and have more to lose?
ОтветитьWhat about a movie like The Conjuring? Should the logline follow the Warrens or the family that's are being attacked and have more to lose?
ОтветитьFew things less shameful than when clearly Latinx surnames are pronounced white-watered-down.
ОтветитьThis didn't age well ...
Ответить"A sexually deviant serial rapist who also happens to be a movie producer must listen to a mediocre elevator pitch in order to get to his opulent penthouse suite so that he can abuse yet another aspiring young actress."
ОтветитьI was doing my little list for my little horror short film and got to the "how does he overcome it?" and went "he doesn't" and uhm... I wrote that on my list...
ОтветитьOof. Name-dropping Weinstein did NOT age well
ОтветитьThis didn’t age well.
ОтветитьThis the perfect example of a great presentation that didn't age well lol. If only you'd known what would happen a short time later lol. Jokes aside, great explanation! Thank you!
Ответитьgreat video on logline, its so casual loved it !! cheers to you guys !
ОтветитьThis was very helpful bro thanks
ОтветитьGreat video, but yikes! That Weinstein bit gave me goosebumps.
ОтветитьThis doesn't age well hahaha
ОтветитьOh shit no get me out of this elevator!
Ответитьweinstein in the elevator aged like milk
ОтветитьThe comments are all about Harvey Weinstein. No need to thank me.
ОтветитьAdapted from the Victor Hugo novel; in 1705 England, a disfigured clown and his blind sweetheart find wonderful success in London with their traveling play, a pagan, darkly comedic piece. But when a twisted, thrill-seeking duchess tempts the clown to become her paramour, his own noble past is revealed and, to return to his beloved, he must use his theatrical skills to confront the political corruption that cut his face into a scarred grin.
ОтветитьDamn has this video not aged well... yikes
ОтветитьMy logline is only one sentence, but it's 3 1/2 lines long! is this acceptable or am I a lazy writer??😅
ОтветитьGood Log
ОтветитьOK, this i s a logline! You walk in an elevator and there is Harvy Weinstein in orange suit, asking you for help...
ОтветитьI am not sure if my logline would be read but here it goes.
I have followed your guidelines and some feedback I received said it's to much wording, and I tend to agree. The problem that I have is that I have two protagonists and two antagonists.
Your feedback will really be appreciated.
The logline for my new book is:
"Whisked to picturesque Valetta, a lonely nurse and betrayed colonel's soul connection set the bar in a stirring plot of spiritual and physical survival as a determined warlord in Africa and cunning cheating wife in America trapped them in time. The healing sands of Iraq their only hope."
When you said, Harvey Weinstein....I quickly checked the upload date
Ответить"A woman is stuck in an elevator with Harvey Weinstein and can't escape until they reach the bottom floor." would be a great logline for a horror movie...
ОтветитьIf I found myself in an elevator with Harvey alone....I'm not thinking about log lines.
ОтветитьEXCELLENT!!!
ОтветитьHow you really explained what a longline is and how to write one in a fun way. Thank you!
ОтветитьYou needed a better example than this producer.
ОтветитьLogline for my spec: When a 10 year old girl breaks her wrist at a construction site she becomes the victim of a mysterious crime:
Title: Not an Accident.
Thank you so much for this 🙏
ОтветитьLoved the video, but the bad guys definitely aren't terrorists. They are burglars or robbers. They are there for the money (bonds) in the vault. Thanks for the great video though.
Ответить>"Holy cow, there's Harvey Weinstein!"
wha
>Jan 12 2017
Oh, okay